Quote ="mat"what your totally ignoring is fact that the pledge letters will have been sent out BEFORE the woeful Warrington 'perfomance' for them to be delivered monday morning. In terms of marketing we were probably at highest goodwill point we were likely to achieve in the days immediately prior to the warrington debacle so it made reasonable sense to send them out when they did. doubt anyone at club expected us to be so spectacularly bad in Wire game as we were. A defeat was probably expected but would it have made more sense to wait till after defeat and related downturn in feelgood factor before sending letters out?
Wording of letter was undoubtedly poor but dont think we're employing mystic meg at club yet.'"
What you're totally ignoring is my middle paragraph.
The "pledge letter" made no sense. It's that simple. Also, it's been done. Break the cycle and do something else, whether more subtle or totally different. Yawnville.
As for the wording of said letter, I don't think JK Rowling will be heading to Odsal for proof readers anytime soon.